Leonor's blog

Hi!!
I chose Leonor's blog to see and criticize it.
Well, her blog doesn't have many things. I could see inside of her blog all the assignments but are just words; she could upload some pictures related with the text, which could be more fun. She has not many interesting things or something that show me who is she, I mean something that represent her, like a picture of her pet because in a post she talks a lot about street dogs, however I can't see anything about her pet and I know she has one called "koda". So that, she could upload some pictures of "koda". Also, she could upload a picture of her in the profile because is a little bit boring if you can't see the face behind the blog.
About the blog's color I think is beautiful, very pink! But is like her.
The other thing that I liked is the glitter text that she put in the down part of the blog, that is very beautiful and make the blog more fun.
There are some other things that she could upload to make more fun her blog and interesting to see it, like a clock or a box with the whether, I think that would be very useful.

Correction

Hi Everyone!!!

I must admit that BBC is a very goos(sp) website. Actually(p) I was watching some important and interesting reports like:. People are sleeping less these(ww) days and this fact is deeply affecting their health because they can(wf) concentrate well, their temperament is eally(sp) frayed and they tend to be always tetchy, like they were angry all the time.This problem could be caused due to the fact that some people are overworked (p)not only because they like working all (x)time but because they need to work more to have enough money to live.The situation is getting worst since teenagers are having the same problem and also some children, because as the fact that some of them have tv or computers inside their bedrooms, they stay awake until several hours after midnight and they have to get up early in the morning. In some cases this could be the cause of their low averages in schools.On the other hand(p) I also read about a page that gives you some english quizzes in few minutes and I really liked the website about phonetic, where we can prctise(sp) the pronunciation and know how we sound. This is veryhelpful(sp) now to improve our spoken skills.
Ok, that´s all for today, Have an excellent weekend!!!
Regards!!! Leonorsh!!!!